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Sage: "This was the end and she accepted it." This gave Sage's dying a peaceful glint.
Vonda: "Her only regret was leaving her companions behind." This made me think that Vonda was an amazing, caring person.
Lucius: "He reached up to the light" He didn't want to die.
Sage: How did she get in this position and why was she so willing to leave her life?
Vonda: I would be joyed to have known this character!
Lucius: What was his life before?
I really would love to know more about all of these characters and what got them to this point in their lives.
I love how all of them were at a heart-wrenching point in their lives—that really made me want to have known the character in person.
If you ever write more about these characters, I am sure to be the first to read and love!