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I am angry with the weapons and the oceans they fill with blood. It's really powerful, considering how international relations are increasingly strained nowadays with North Korea's Nuclear Weaponry development. Like you, I don't understand why and how people kill. I am also infuriated at the impotency of national leaders. Why cannot they find a peaceful resolution?
I resonate with you. All of these are so true! You can disagree with me, but I feel that some guys are more disciplined after taking up a physical activity of choice. That aside, I agree hands down with the women gossiping portion and the widening income gap. Yours is a very topical prose with a very powerful voice that is heard at least, by the reviewer here.
What can we do in order to solve this problem? I feel your indignancy, in fact, all that are listed here are somethings that make majority's blood boil. What solution can we implement bottom-up in order to let people open their eyes and see that we are progressing on a wrong way?
Very topical write which handles sensitive topics very skillfully. I feel your indignancy, and I'm sure you're not alone. The same voice is echoed by me and also the Black Eyed Peas' "One Love". You summarise the problems the world is facing very well, and how we are facing a large social and political malaise that everyone has a part to play in. Based on the three facets, media, politics and humanity that you have raised, we can't deny there is progress, but indeed it is going very slowly. I'm angry because if only these people stopped to listen to what the people have to say. If only they learned from their mistakes instead of sitting down at the General Assembly everytime to start over. Perhaps the world would be a better place with more specific action instead of just talk. Kudos to you on such a powerful write！