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Line 17, stanza u: I am angry with the homes destroyed by the million. I find it so relatable because I see the poor and homeless on the streets when there are houses right next door that are in good shape and in need of a dweller.
Anger and sadness. This got me riled up and inspired. You know it's good writing when you feel something.
What are you happy about? From what I've learned, anger cannot exist without happiness. What about the world makes you happy and excited?
The rhyming is wonderful, and the message is clear. However, I think you could elaborate more on why these things make you angry, though most of it is self explanatory, if you elaborated I think you piece could be even more emotional.