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"I am sad/Because my words do not make a sound"...it's just a beautiful way to end your poem!! I absolutely love it.
I'm left with a nostalgia that makes me wish that I was young again and didn't know how messed up the world was.
What was the spark that made you write down your frustrations with the world?
I LOVE this piece, its so true and doesn't gloss over anything, which makes it beautiful! The only line that I would suggest changing is the line about the fear of innocent mothers for their children...I wasn't exactly sure on what you meant there. But other than that, awesome job!!!! :)