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I can't say much in this piece delighted me but it was very moving. You were able to let us deep into your thoughts and your feelings with just using words. It's hard to do that and you did well.
There's nothing else I need to know you used powerful words and know where to put them.
If you aren't feeling loved I got to tell you that I know someone who does (not to get all religious on you) but his name is Jesus. And he loves you so much he died for you. Check out some of my writing to know more about him if you want. And remember you are loved.