Yosemite 6

Christy Wisdom

United States

Hello people! What to say? I'm a Christian girl. I like to write. I write tons of poetry, some short stories, and other things.
I like
NARUTO
Imagine Dragons
LOTR
Harry Potter
Agents of SHIELD
Artemis Fowl
My Hero Academia
God bless you!

Message from Writer

There is no happiness like that of being loved by your fellow-creatures, and feeling that your presence is an addition to their comfort. - Jane Eyre

Not all those who wander are lost. - Lord of the Rings

I have come home at last! This is my real country! I belong here. This is the land I have been looking for all my life, though I never knew it till now. -C.S. Lewis, The Last Battle

Things to know about me
1. I'm a Christian.
2. I'm Pro-life.
3. I do not put any swearing (oh my gosh included) into any of my stories.
4. I will not put any sex or nudity into my stories.
Thank you to all who have supported me, and feedback is always welcome!
Also, if you comment on a piece of mine, I will generally respond to it at some point.

the wind took the leaf (and nobody noticed)

March 4, 2019

FREE WRITING

3
as i walk down the
street
the rain falls softly
all around me

d
r
i
p
p
i
n
g
off the sides of 
buildings

running in rivulets
off my umbrella

soaking
that homeless
man
sleeping on the 
bench
with a newspaper
over his head

i can't feel the chill
i have a heavy coat
and the freezing rain
hasn't touched my 
face
and the biting wind
hasn't seeped through my
scarf

but he is shivering
trembling like a leaf
about to break free
of its branch

in an instant
it could give up
let go
suddenly gone. 

would anybody
notice?
a leaf among thousands
would anybody realize
that it's already
gone?

 

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5 Comments
  • Christy Wisdom

    Thanks!!!


    8 months ago
  • pencils.and.paper.roses

    I literally went "whoa" after reading this...
    Holy
    COWS


    8 months ago
  • Christy Wisdom

    Thanks so much!!! Also, I love metafive that's just amazing.


    8 months ago
  • Quille

    *Fantabulous :) I can't even type! XD


    8 months ago
  • Quille

    ..... wow..... I'm pretty speechless after reading this. I thought after reading the title that it would be about a leaf on a tree, and it is; sort of. Really a huge metafive (better than a metaphor ;) and it's absolutely gorgeous in every way! I'm just mind-blown after reading it :) Fnatabulous!! :DDD


    8 months ago