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"she got back up, noticeably". because it gives a sense that the character is strong willed and determined to come back stronger.
I'd like to know the reasons as to why she feels the was she does and why she is the way she is. Basically, i wan to know her story.
I actually am so in love with this piece. Keep up the good work! you're amazingly talented