Peer Review by tamiiiaaaa (United States)

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By: Tacita

PROMPT: Quartet


She lived, content if not happy, dwelling in her corner of the universe. She loved, quietly and fiercely, keeping it to herself.

She died, silently.

She got back up, noticeably.

belladonna, bonny shears
She ran from home to hide underground, in more ways than one. She stole secrets, big and small, some to hoard and some to sell, and cultivated acquaintances as a horticulturist tends their plants; carefully, with distanced affection and keen calculation. And, as these things go, she made a mistake.

o the beloved
She trimmed her hair, her nails, her fangs. She packed her bag full of everything she had left of what she loved. She ate her shadow, and then she left.


Peer Review

"she got back up, noticeably". because it gives a sense that the character is strong willed and determined to come back stronger.

I'd like to know the reasons as to why she feels the was she does and why she is the way she is. Basically, i wan to know her story.

Reviewer Comments

I actually am so in love with this piece. Keep up the good work! you're amazingly talented