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That it truly captures what it means to feel as if you belong somewhere, and at the same time, how fragile such a feeling can be.
Perhaps you could have added a few personal details about your own state of belonging at this point, but I completely understand how difficult that can be.
You should be really proud of this piece, as I'm sure it will resonate with so many people. Good job :)