Yosemite 6

Christy Wisdom

United States

Hello people! What to say? I'm a Christian girl. I like to write. I write tons of poetry, some short stories, and other things.
I like
NARUTO
Imagine Dragons
LOTR
Harry Potter
Agents of SHIELD
Artemis Fowl
My Hero Academia
God bless you!

Message from Writer

There is no happiness like that of being loved by your fellow-creatures, and feeling that your presence is an addition to their comfort. - Jane Eyre

Not all those who wander are lost. - Lord of the Rings

I have come home at last! This is my real country! I belong here. This is the land I have been looking for all my life, though I never knew it till now. -C.S. Lewis, The Last Battle

Things to know about me
1. I'm a Christian.
2. I'm Pro-life.
3. I do not put any swearing (oh my gosh included) into any of my stories.
4. I will not put any sex or nudity into my stories.
Thank you to all who have supported me, and feedback is always welcome!
Also, if you comment on a piece of mine, I will generally respond to it at some point.

#N.Poetry Loneliness

February 26, 2019

FREE WRITING

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looking through my bedroom window,
the frost obscures my vision-
or is it my tears?
no, it can't be, for
my tears have dried
only pain remains.

they say parting
is such sweet sorrow

they're wrong.

i have said so many goodbyes,
watched friends breathe their last-

and it was never sweet. 

we won the war, but i lost everything.

loneliness is all that's left 
a building ache in my heart,
so intense i want to scream
but all i can do is 
fall to my knees, fall to pieces

when i go outside,
i can hear their laughter
on the wind

it haunts me

i feel a soft hand-
my sister's-
in mine

vivid memory, phantom pain

i can't bear it.
it hurts more than anything, this horrible loneliness
but if i leave my solitude
i'm sure the ghosts will destroy me
from the inside out

they already have. 
 
As a challenge, I tried writing to an instrumental song. The song is Loneliness from Naruto Shippuden. 

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4 Comments
  • Christy Wisdom

    :DDD


    5 months ago
  • Quille

    Extremely surprised :DDD


    5 months ago
  • Christy Wisdom

    Thanks :DD
    Very surprised indeed ;)


    5 months ago
  • Quille

    Woah.......... Good luck in the contest; this is fantastic!! :DDD Very surprised at the Naruto song ;)


    5 months ago