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i don't know what i just wrote. does it make sense?
I love how you communicate the emotions here. It's so real and raw. I love how you show the shifting, confusing, desperate mess of being in love through this poem.
I feel like more figurative language and description could've been used. Maybe a little about the person that this is addressed to, what they're like, what makes the narrator love and hate them at the same time?
Fantastic poem! I could really feel the emotion here, as it shifts from one stanza to the next, and I felt that I was standing in the narrator's shoes. All the critiques I have to make, I've made above, so I'll leave you with this: excellent work!