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Message to Readers
Keeping in line with my 2019 writing resolution, I've published a new short story!
EVERYTHING!!! Karin seems like a great person with a amazing personality that just go very bad luck. I mean, she doesn't gets to see anyone, and she is stuck in the hospital. It was sad to read.
Are Karin and Timothy's dad dead? (just checking) Their mom works at the hospital, right? IS THERE GOING TO BE A SEQUEL?
Keep on writing! It is evidently paying off!