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Message to Readers
Random and slightly careless: just like my guitar-playing. Tell me how to improve this piece!
Peer Review
The usage of letters is beautifully formatted. What you did here couldn't be written in an essay form. It's full of character and motivated me to pick up my guitar again.
If you want to know what you can improve on maybe describe the look of your guitar, or when you mentioned humming a tune of " a song I am just about to create," what song?
Reviewer Comments
I love love love the words you use! You're a beautiful writer!