Written By: ghostlyglory
February 21, 2019
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ok its been some time since i read this and i keep thinking of a good comment that does it justice. which im not sure i can achieve.
i guess i should start by saying that im not a good poetry reader (or writer lol) because i find it too complicated. it doesn't flow naturally, it's too structured- or not structured enough, or broken up into tiny little chunks that take too much energy to decipher and offer too little gratification.
needless to say, this is a poem that Does The Exact Opposite. the structure helps the flow expertly. this is a poem that speaks to me of innocent disillusionment. feels a bit like when you're growing up and beginning to realize that adults kind of suck and - that abandonment, light 'treason', bitterness that is inevitable to getting older. i have never seen any work of art represent this feeling so well.
i'm not going to say anything like 'fantastic job', because it would be too superficial for a piece this good
thank you for writing this.
STOP WRITING SO WELL YOU ARE MAKING ME ANGRY WITH THE WORLD
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