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Message to Readers
I decided to tag this for the contest
the language and imagery is beautiful! i love all your poems! you some how find a way to twist words into something magical
i suggest that you go further in on this! this is a great poem, however is seems too short. i would love if you could dig deeper into the concept.
i'm so sorry that i didn't submit this sooner. some unexpected things happened and i kept meaning to submit this review but just didn't get to it until today!