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dreaming of goddesses, sunflowers and italian sunshine.

write free, SomeFormOfWriting
miss you, LackingASocialLife
go be great, paperbird

Message to Readers

this is so unpolished and i'll be honest, i wasn't quite sure how to replace the tense pauses in this kind of dialogue format, but i guess this is the product.

likes and comments appreciated!

the choice they didn't want to make | #standalonedialogue

February 20, 2019


"we've been over this - there is no other way. this is it. el, you have to let me do it. it's the only way. i can drug him by disguising the sleeping pill as an aphrodisiac and making him take it by kissing him-"
    "no, absolutely not."
    "do you want to get out of here or not?"
     "...please...just... stay safe."
    "...hard to remain as something you've never been."
an excerpt of a concept i was working on but then pushed to the side indefinitely.
i did all the worldbuilding and then didn't know how to end it (as usual).


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  • weirdo

    Contest results are out!

    6 months ago
  • Majestically Awkward Manatee

    this is interesting!

    7 months ago
  • Araw


    7 months ago
  • weirdo

    very creative! good luck in my contest!

    7 months ago
  • Onion3102

    definitely an interesting concept- would love to see what you do with this in the future if you come back to it!

    7 months ago