Peer Review by Suri Purefoy (United States)

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Breath of Life

By: Fones


I breathed,
then life entered me.


Message to Readers

just a thought :)


Peer Review

When I read your six-word-memoir, the first thought that came to me was of coming out of the womb and taking your first breathe as an infant. But then more flooded in. Maybe life was unsure before, but you took a "breath" and now you are truly living?


"Life is a wonderful thing, and these words prove it."


Reviewer Comments

I really like your intake on the prompt "Six Word Memoir". In six words, you made a flood of possibilities of what this could mean. Great job!