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Lost and Found: Dear Lost...

By: AJ - Izzy


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Dear Lost

I know what you are going through,
I struggled through it for many, many years. 

You have been so kind to me, 
Given me so much credit that
I don't know if I deserve... 
You've always had a special place in my heart. 

Please don't apologize for being strong
Or for being hard
Or wrong
Because that is a strength in you!

And I want to tell you that you are special
To me
To your friends
To your family
Never forget that, Lost. 

Remember what I told you
All those years ago when
We were both seekers of the truth:

Live like it's the last life you got, laugh like no one's watching, and LOVE. Love with your whole heart because you only have one, and it longs to nourish you.

It should be ME that is thanking YOU.

You've given me a purpose, 
A reason to laugh,
A reason to live,
Someone to love. 

And even though you might not believe it,
YOU are that one I love.
Just you. 

You are my life, my laugh, and my love. I could not wish for more. 

Sincerely, 

Found

 

You can find Lost's first letter to Found here

Message to Readers

"To send a letter is a good way to go somewhere without moving anything but your heart."
- Phyllis Theroux


Peer Review

i love this so much. the choice of words and the writing style are on point!


i was kind of expecting that maybe this poem will write about what lost did to found (that thing lost mentioned in the first poem)


Reviewer Comments

i truly enjoyed this poem. i can't wait to read more of your poetry. i reviewed this tho i already finished the 3 reviews because i loved this poem so much!!