Peer Review by A Breath Into Silence (United States)

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Wolves

By: LittleWolf


FREE WRITING

the wolves howl
in the pale snowscape
haunting

they are the sole sound of life
in this barren wasteland
beautiful

they are the voices of my mind
discordant
shimmering in the pale expanses of my conscience
 


Peer Review

The clear and simple format of this poem!


I feel like this poem is pretty great the way it is. If I had one nitpick, it would be that the last stanza feels flipped around.


Reviewer Comments

Wow! I love your poetry!!! You have a way with words :)