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i really love this. your imagery is so beautiful. I know nothing about piano but this poem still speaks to me!
This is already really good. Maybe you could add a little more details including your color. I marked a place in the margins where you could do that!
I have a feeling that you will win the contest! I'm working on an entry, but it sucks. :/
I'll review your other piece later today.