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I'm gonna republish this. Again, and again, and again.
first the whole piece gave me something to think about, it made me see that sometimes i have this mindset that the person i argue with is my enemy. i like the fact that this piece made me learn something new and look at things from a different perspective.
i would like to know how to keep it in mind during an argument that this person right here is not my enemy, how do i do that? yes they are not my enemy but can we truly be friends? yes additional details would invite me further into reading.
it's a beautiful piece and it made me smile :)