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MimiChoudhury

India

Hey
I am Swastika but everyone calls me Mimi
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"It does not do to dwell in dreams and forget to live" -Albus Dumbledore

Some must reads:

The Resistance by Gamma Malley

The Legacy by Gemma Malley

All the Harry Potter Books by J.K. Rowling

Little Women by Louisa May Alcott

Uncle Tom's Cabin by Harriet Beacher Stowe

Dracula by Bram Stoker ( in my opinion, way better than Twilight ;) )

Why I Don't celebrate Valentine's day.

May 13, 2019

FREE WRITING

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I was skipping up and down the broken lane. Today....today would be the day....

I could already hear his wonderful musical voice from there. His gentle warm hands, touching my blonde hair , rechristening all those memories that we had left years before. But now, it was time to give them a new name.

My happiness knew no bounds , when I found out his address from Sarah. Tears had welled up my eyes, as I thanked her profusely and set out to surprise him. I could already see his blue eyes gaping at me in wonder and excitement.

Today I  would tell what I could not tell five years earlier.

My heart began fluttering when I reached the iron gate of his house. The moment...the moment....

Trring !!Trring!!!

I looked up hopefully to see his awestruck eyes looking at me in wonder and excitement, but saw a sickly looking woman looking down at me curiously.
"What do you want??"
"Can i see Mr. Thomas Pattinson??"

Suddenly a shadow of grief came over her already sickly face as she said ,
"Oh...but I am so sorry to say ...he 's no more madam. Yes....died suddenly ....used to mumble about not able to tell a girl something all his life......"

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14 Comments
  • Saki

    I like how the writing keeps its pace. It's so clear and to the point. I also found rhymes within the lines, very nice, though dunno if that was intended, instinctive, or coincidental.


    about 1 month ago
  • rubywriter2004

    This is really good
    :)


    about 1 month ago
  • Jae

    wow, this is really sad, and amazingly written at the same time. great work
    :D


    about 2 months ago
  • Elizabeth Chancey

    Amazing.... beautiful... Heartbreakingly amazing.


    about 2 months ago
  • RNE

    this is so well written. that last sentence killed me!!


    2 months ago
  • buddingauthor

    Oh wow this is so beautiful yet sad. Great job.


    2 months ago
  • spearmint

    You got the plot twist. This was so beautiful and sad!! The last sentence...


    2 months ago
  • MimiChoudhury

    ;D


    2 months ago
  • xXlunagirlXx

    Awww... I'm getting goosebumps, I really hope this is just a figment of your imagination, or I shall die of asphyxiation.


    2 months ago
  • MimiChoudhury

    Thanks so much all of you . That means a lot. Actually...i planned to gv it a happy ending...but i changed my mind at the last second....thought of gving it a plot twist.


    3 months ago
  • Kahasai

    Oh, so sad, but so well written. To repeat what everyone else has already said.


    3 months ago
  • Ryder

    oh...such a tragedy........;-;


    3 months ago
  • Ursa Rover

    aw so sad:(
    good job.


    3 months ago
  • Quille

    That's really sad :( Very well-written, but heartbreaking.


    3 months ago