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Please let me know how you understood this piece. I would be happier with peer reviews! I just hope this poem transcends the issue I want to voice.
The first stanza was very interesting. I the verbs you used (i.e. rummaging, anyalyze, etc..) gave your piece a strong voice.
It was slightly vague, so in the future I would work on that.
I didn't understand for the most part what you were trying to say. A few clarifications here and there would make sense. Other than that, this was really creative and cool!