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Written By: EAurora
February 13, 2019
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i lovee this piece! the flow is wonderful, especially the rhyming. my favorite lines are probably "And banish the jewels that well in his eyes." and "His shoulders hunched by the weight of his mind,"
This is beautifully written! It flows really well. I especially like the lines "He is sitting somewhere at the edge of the world / His shoulders hunched by the weight of his mind," though honestly there are so many good lines here. Good job!
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