asteria

United States of America

don't settle for the mundane;

chaos is far more intriguing.

Message to Readers

constructive criticism welcome!
i keep coming back to this piece, which was sort of inspired by my other poem, "omen."
also inspired by a friend
thanks for visiting :)

we are

February 13, 2019

FREE WRITING

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what are women?

we are rumbling of mountain, trembling of young.
we are fire splitting sky, liquid drenching tongue.

do you really want to know?

we are raven in tempest, heat in blustery trial.
we are thorns under petals, intensity under smile.

we are
Q u e e n s .
~asteria

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15 Comments
  • asteria

    @Dmoral13
    oh! thank you, that is really cool! i'm following them now :)


    9 months ago
  • Dmoral13

    @asteria
    I don't know if you follow or know the account, but I got Writers of the World to add the #Queens


    9 months ago
  • asteria

    thank you @luluwrites111 :)


    9 months ago
  • luluwrites111

    I love the imagery in this.


    9 months ago
  • asteria

    @Dmoral13
    woo! let's do this :)


    9 months ago
  • Dmoral13

    @asteria
    oooh, i'm so in!!! and we'll tell the guys to put it in their bios and the girls #queens


    9 months ago
  • asteria

    ooh lets do Dmoral13!!! start a revolution of the #Queens from the inside out!

    (p.s. don't forget to support the freaking cool boys out there, because my friend planted this idea in my head and he is a #king)


    9 months ago
  • Dmoral13

    It's in your bio too!!! Thanks for joining me!
    (we could low key start a revolution or moment of something, lol)


    9 months ago
  • asteria

    thank youuu acrosstheskysky!


    9 months ago
  • acrosstheskysky

    i LOVE the imagery in this and your word choice especially the word "blustery"(idk why i just like that word?)!!


    9 months ago
  • asteria

    wow thank you!!! I appreciate all the support!
    i guess #Queens is a thing now :)


    9 months ago
  • Julius Caesar

    yas gurl! PREACH!! #Queens


    9 months ago
  • Dmoral13

    Great work
    _new trend_ #Queens
    this is so going in my bio


    9 months ago
  • asteria

    thank you!


    9 months ago
  • AminahMcBina

    Oh wow, I absolutely loved this! #QUEENS! This piece was so strong, well done!


    9 months ago