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This piece affects the writer by the point that it delivers to the readers. Even I felt affected of the piece since we are the ones who kill the sharks. It is so painful to our guts that we use them for our own daily needs and lately we would pay for what we had done.
I was compelled of ourselves killing the sharks living in this world and the major effect of doing this.