Pi_Pen

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// LGBTQ+ ally // Feminist // Gun control // Pro choice // Save the earth // Pi digit memorizer
// Debater // Agnostic //

Message to Readers

This is just a small poem I jotted down some time ago, and I thought it would be a nice first piece to introduce my fellow writers to my way of thinking and points of view.
I'd love to hear some critiques on my writing style, and I'm interested in hearing what you think about this topic. Thank you for reading.

The Hypocrisy of Society

February 9, 2019

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10
They say
"Girls,
You're
strong,
beautiful,
smart,
confident!
Don't mind
what others say
about your looks,
it's what's inside
that counts!"
Well,
If I really am
smart,
why are you reminding me?
If I really am
strong,
why do you need to encourage me?
If I really am
confident,
why are you telling me this instead of me telling you?
If it's really what's inside that counts,
why are you telling me I'm beautiful?

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5 Comments
  • Pi_Pen

    @Julius Caesar // I would, but I'm agnostic. ;D XD


    10 months ago
  • Julius Caesar

    oh yes. PREACH!!!


    10 months ago
  • Anha

    yes! also, welcome! looking at you're bio, it seems like we'll get on just fine :)
    (honestly there's too many god fanatics, protective gun owners and pro-life crazies on this site for me to even think straight sometimes)


    10 months ago
  • fatpanda

    I relate


    10 months ago
  • Johanna

    Ooh this is so deep and so true...


    10 months ago