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this is a piece I wrote during one of my downtimes.
Written By: Aldrich
February 9, 2019
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Ditto @Oscar_Locke, the simplicity of this piece is fantastic, but I'm seeing an underlying layer of complexity that is astounding. I love the line 'then i see demons/then i feel nothing.' It's very meaningful and could be interpreted in a variety of ways :)
Also, word choices like 'reverberating' and 'frequencies' are well put to use in this.
Awesome poem!! Keep 'em coming, Dude! :DDDD
This strongly reminds me of sleep paralysis. Love the piece's simplicity.
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