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My favorite line is when you said that you wrote her a card and made everyone sign it to show her how she impacted everyone. But I think, you writing this draft, that you have just impacted her life even more, whether she reads this or not. Now, everyone will know how special she was to you.
I think that you described everything pretty dang good. But, I would love to know more about your journey in the library.
A very good story. I love the way you wrote it. From a child's perspective, but with the writing of an experienced, mature person. Very well done!