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Mary Dvorak

United States

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I wrote this a week after witnessing my father trying to kill himself in front of me for the third time. I am a new writer very open to criticism, please and thank you

Déjà Vu

February 24, 2016

PROMPT: Setting as Mood

I still replay you trying to jump out the second floor window, from last Tuesday night. 

I didn’t know déjà vu existed till I saw you laying on the ground with an angel on your shoulders, picking you up from the depths for the third time.  

It all still replays for me, Dad.


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  • Josephine O'Grady

    Ehh, I just published a piece in response to this prompt and Tuesday is an important part of the story...I didn't see your piece until after I published my own; you have my word that I didn't get my story idea from yours.

    over 2 years ago