• the true alchemists do not change lead into gold; they change the world into words •
Just a sporadic writer who drinks too much tea
Written By: EAurora
February 9, 2019
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wow i love your poetry. and how perfect the rhymes are. the ending is so powerful as well amazing
i adore you this is gorgeous and i love it wow, my fave lines are probably "tasting tongues, burnt lungs, rose hip/bleeding star from twitching lip" and "in twisted lullabies danced our show/you bloomed and told the earth to grow/can i be blamed for falling so?/you were the one who let me go" (oops that was the entire last stanza) and all of it is so eloquent and just very very beautiful
this is so beautiful how. this feels professional. THE RHYMES ARE SO GOOD
"the longing gleaned from every night / from angel wings in wandering white"
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