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Alliyah

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Hello everyone! I'm Alliyah. Writing is my passion. I'm a member of The Church of Jesus Christ of Latter Days Saints. I also love nature, reading, making people laugh, playing sports, photography and art.

Message to Readers

Hi, everyone! Here's my second published piece--first really, unless you count my writing goals. It's sort of a sad piece...but it felt right for me so I delivered. I welcome any reviews and/or comments. Thanks! -Alliyah

The Same Time

February 6, 2019

PROMPT: Tiny Love Story

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I thought I couldn't live without her.
I was wrong. 
In a way.
 My heart was still beating. My body kept on living.
But in a way I was right. 
When she died, sunshine died too. 
Laughter died.
Happiness hid its face. 
It rained all day--but no one danced in the downpour. I simply watched from indoors as the sky bled grey tears onto the world. 
When she died part of me died with her. The part that she brought out. The best part. 
So I guess in a way, we died at the exact same time. 
The same time.

 

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  • Alliyah

    Thank you so much! I always enjoy reading your comments! --Alliyah


    5 months ago
  • AbigailSauble

    Aw, this is so sad!
    I like how you repeated part of the second to last sentence as a few parting words for your readers ...
    So sweet.


    5 months ago