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You're writing style is so compelling. I love the way the poem flows. The way you write makes the panic attack seem real. The poem is honest and raw--with a sort of rugged beauty. What an amazing job!
I think it 'panic attack' did a beautiful job of describing--with both thoughts and actions.
I love this piece! You're such a talented writer. You're style and skill make this piece both fascinating and compelling.
Can't wait to see more from you! :)