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draft ii. help me.
This piece is very well done! The imagery and the wording you used painted the scene very well. The conclusion wrapped it up very nicely, especially the last line. I also feel that the use of only lower case added character to the writing.
It might have added more to the piece if you elaborated on the conclusion, going more into depth on what affects throwing your stars away had on you.
I loved this! The connection between stick on stars and ones heart was very creative. Your writing style is very strong!