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Message to Readers
draft ii. help me.
your metaphors have got me wanting more, everything about this piece is phenomenal. brilliantly drafted. the way your emotions are displayed are so..so..vivid that i feel more like i'm watching a movie than reading a poem. i feel like a spider and your words are caught on my web and instead of devouring them i'm caught in awe and shock on what i managed to capture(is this getting confusing?)... what i meant is that when i heard the title i did not know what i was going to stumble on.
i seriously don't know how you do this! exceptionally written, well done!! comment on any of my pieces if you want me to review anything else.