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Your style of critique is definitely fierce.
You use personal examples throughout the piece that make it seem more authentic and meaningful.
What lies at the heart of the poem is a call to overcome self-doubt. I'm left feeling disappointed in the way that society deals with self-doubt.
You provide a fierce critique of self-doubt laced with personal examples through a natural tone. You make many compelling points and use comparison to your advantage, drawing attention to change that should be made. Going forward, editing your work for flow (using punctuation correctly) will help you to clearly send across your message. All in all, nice work, and I hope to read more of your work soon!