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I know I was too late for the actual contest, but any feedback would be appreciated. I got an expert review, and the reviewer suggested that I covered too much territory in my piece. Is it confusing? I'm no whiz, but maybe my familiarity with the Bible led me to simply put too much information in my piece. Is that the case?
Written By: Silver Pen
February 22, 2019