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The explanation of why you can't grow without pain was very relatable and beautifully written that made me want to buy the book. Also, you used a lot of personal experience and how you felt after reading the book and you were influenced which made me want to read it a lot!
I think that maybe you could be more descriptive about the "perfect" world and the story itself. By adding a quick summary of the book, I think the reader of the review will understand what you're talking about in the later paragraphs better (where you mention that there is no pain without growth). Also, maybe you could shorten the highlighted part.
I think that your review is really strong, and recommends the book well. However, maybe instead of explaining how the story unfolds (ex. it is slow paced), you could put a shortened summary and explain more about how the book affected you/add on more personal experiences. Also, maybe you could add concrete details/particular scenes that made you feel a certain way?
I think you're piece is great! The vocabulary, flow and structure is very nice that makes the reader keep reading your reviews. The introduction is a great hook because the questions become more and more detailed as you come to an end, and connect smoothly to the main paragraph. Well done!!
I loved reading this book review! I think with little editing, your piece will become a professional book review. Your style of writing is very engaging and just perfect. Maybe your introduction questions could be changed a bit, like the "Divergent" part as readers may not know it. An advice my teacher told me was: "Write like the person who reads what you write has no idea about the thing you're writing about". So, I think it may help if you write as if the person doesn't know any books. This way, I think your writing will be clear to anyone of any age. Otherwise, GREAT JOB and good luck!!! :)