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Short little contest #6

February 8, 2019


Before I start this, I'd just like to say I'm so sorry for doing this kinda (okay, really) late. I helped out AminahMcBina with the reviews for her contest (which were like 55), and then some stuff happened IRL. I'm good now, though :) And I know that a lot of you are probably wondering why I keep doing these contests--they are a ton of work, but I love reading your entries. They're so unique and creative and I love them.
Quick little contest by the fly here.

Finish this sentence: I/we can't last if...

Choose one of the following categories: humor, romance (also includes friendships, familial love, things that suggest romances, etc), and short but sweet/powerful.

Please post your entry in the comments. Also post which category your sentence fits into. Sentences without a category will be disqualified. You entry may only be ONE (1) sentence long. You can submit up to 5 entries total, and it is possible to win more than once. And yes, you can ask questions :) Can't wait to see what everyone comes up with!

Due Date is January 9. I'll be posting this a few times. Prizes are as follows:
FIRST PLACE: Three reviews (your choice or random)
SECOND PLACE: Two reviews )your choice or random)
THIRD PLACE: One review (your choice or random)
HONORABLE MENTION: One comment on up to three different pieces (your choice or random)
I'm also going to bring the "user-hosted contests going on right now" piece back, for those of you who are wondering ;)


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  • janice

    Something came up yesterday (screw you, valentines), so probably later today or later tomorrow.

    5 months ago
  • Anha

    just curious; when are the results gonna come out?

    5 months ago
  • paperbird

    short contest results are out!

    5 months ago
  • palindrome

    Romance: I can't last if I can't have him at my side, holding me up, helping me face the light.
    Short but sweet: I can't last another day if I forget to enjoy the breath I've been given.
    We can't last if you think I'm just another prize, just another trophy for you to put on a shelf (Romance).
    It can't last, it was never meant to be. (Romance)

    Thank you for doing this! Good luck to all those who entered.

    5 months ago
  • QueenAriana

    Short/Powerful: If you had a second chance, to do over one day, one moment, one second, would you choose to make it better for them or better for you?
    Romance: I can't love you if you push me away and never pull me back.

    Humor: Go away! You're too funny, I can't breathe.

    5 months ago
  • Dmoral13

    Humor: I can't last if you take away Mr.Cuddles!
    Romance: We can't last if you start to doubt me now.
    Short/Powerful: I can't last if you chose to walk away.

    5 months ago
  • Ryder

    We can't last if we don't have God - short but sweet/powerful

    5 months ago
  • Johanna

    We can't last if you're going to keep stealing my ice cream, you sly little furry monster! (humor)
    I can't last if you burn all my paper and boil all my ink- no, I won't last. (powerful...?)
    We can't last if you need a map to find your way into my heart. (romance)

    5 months ago
  • fatpanda

    we can't last if you continue to wither away. (romance)
    i can't last in this bubbling sauna, it's mysterious depths constantly gnawing at my skin. (powerful?)
    i can't last in this cruel, cruel world. (powerful?)

    5 months ago
  • TheLittlePenguin

    I can't last if society keeps on trying to change me. - (Powerful)
    We can't last if we only focus on our mistakes. - (Powerful)
    I can't last if I never learn to love myself. - (Powerful)

    5 months ago
  • AbigailSauble

    ~ I can't last if all we do is ignore each other in real life when we both know our love crosses to eternity. (romance)
    ~ I can't last if you're not beside me to hold my hand, like we did on those short summer evenings. (romance)
    ~ We can't last through this storm of souls, unless we cling to each other in hope of a better tomorrow. (short but sweet)
    ~ We can't last much longer floating on this raft, but - oh wait, is that a fin? (humor)

    5 months ago
  • Ellie!

    We can't last if we keep laughing at every single ridiculous thing in this world - there are way too many.
    I'm entering this as humor ;)

    5 months ago
  • AJ - Izzy

    I can't last if my heart continues to beat, threatening to rip through my chest, grasping for the one thing that made my lungs heave and my eyes flutter open... you. (romance)

    We can't last if you keep setting traps outside my door, I mean it! (humour)

    5 months ago
  • Blotted Ink with a Broken Quill

    I can't last... No, no!
    "MY LIP BALM!"

    6 months ago
  • xXlunagirlXx

    I can't last if I have to keep watching you die...over and over and over...-powerful.

    I can't last if you won't let me pummel that bas-idiot, that tried to hurt my baby, to a pulp! -humour sweet

    We can't last if you have to move...-romance

    6 months ago
  • Anha

    i can't last if you keep on telling me my eyes as galaxies, when really they're just dying stars. (powerful)

    "we can't last if you keep bringing home every puppy you see - look at our pet food expenses!" (humour)

    i can't last if you never tell me you love me. (short but sweet, romance)

    "we can't last if you're going to keep choosing your fucking bees over me, jerry." (humour)

    we can't last if we keep this up - many have tried, but every great nation is doomed to fall, the next roman empire left in the rubble. (powerful)

    6 months ago
  • Mary Wall

    I can't last if I can't walk one more time on a dewy morning, feeling the balmy air coat my lungs and heal my numb brain cells to make me feel alive again perhaps for the last time.
    short/sweet and powerful ( maybe? idk:)

    6 months ago
  • paperbird

    i can't last without clear air to kiss my lungs; but all of it is scorch black, clumsy sweeps that crush my lungs instead of nestle them.

    6 months ago
  • Quille

    I can't last if he doesn't notice me soon. - romance?

    6 months ago
  • Christy Wisdom

    We can't last if it goes on like this; I'm afraid we're fighting a losing battle. short but powerful?

    I can't last if you keep tickling me! Humor

    I can't last, I've lost too much blood... not too much time left... take care of... my sister... okay? Romance or Short but sweet

    We can't last if you cheat on me anymore. Romance

    I can't last if my hopes and dreams are ripped from my grasp; it's the cruelest thing that could be done to me, and you did it. Short but powerful

    6 months ago
  • pencils.and.paper.roses

    Look, I can't last if you don't give me my shoes back!
    Humor. XD

    6 months ago
  • Quille

    I can't last if you don't.
    romance :)

    6 months ago
  • Blotted Ink with a Broken Quill

    I can't last unless the stars fall in a plummeting rain from the sky, one after the other, and light up the metallic sky, breathing life back into smeared crayon of a painted earth. :powerful:

    6 months ago