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Majestically Awkward Manatee

United States

13 years old.
california.

imagine dragons.
coldplay.

aquarius.
ravenclaw.
infj-t.

cat lover.
coffee drinker.

golfer.
figure skater.

pianist.
singer.
dancer.
artist.

writer.

dreamer.

❤️

Message to Readers

Feedback is very much appreciated! :D

Random Ramblings

February 2, 2019

FREE WRITING

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how do you know you've died
when everyone around you is dead
when everything infinite has fallen

d
 o
  w
    n


an endless hole
like bowling pins
only you'll never come back
or see the light again



 
I honestly don't even know what this is, I just felt like I needed to get something out of my head. Feedback is welcome :)

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  • Majestically Awkward Manatee

    @Quille thanks!!! :D


    5 months ago
  • Quille

    I like the comparison to bowling pins! This is such a fantastic concept here and I like how you wove such a complex theme into so few words :) 'when everyone around you is dead' feels to me like a key line because it could mean so many things while 'or see the light again' provides a perfect conclusion with a hope-crusher.... unless ...... :DD Also the usage of 'infinite' is very well done and the format of 'down' adds a good bit of visual interest :D
    Well done with this poem!!! :DDD


    5 months ago