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Greetings, humans. Facts about me: Sense of humour: Odd. Style of writing: Well. Randomness: Predictably so. Hobbies: Living. Aspiration: Famous. Likeliness to achieve aspiration: Not very. Biggest fan: Me.

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I should say something wise and insightful in these 750 characters. Sadly, I lack insight. I live to entertain and to be entertained. The world needs more hilarity, and I hope to assist it with that goal.

Together We Triumph

February 1, 2019


Bullets from life tearing through my chest.
I try to survive, I am doing my best.
I turn to my friends, who are my bullet-proof vest.
But the gunshots of life will never let me rest.

So many snipers firing at me,
all so well hidden, so hard to see.
I won't be beaten, I want to be free,
so please hold your fire and just let me be.

Dancing from within the grave
My soul levitates
from corner to corner waiting upon the day
that you'd come bearing gifts, a rose or two
and maybe so an apology too?

My armour isn’t how it used to be,
I have been hurt,
I have been left behind,
yet I will blanket my people
if bullets came their way!

Eventually, I manage to get my own gun. 
Now I'm on top, shining like the sun. 
Life let me have my way for a while. 
Hopefully, it will the whole last mile.

My friends, on whom I depend,
triumphantly walk with me 'till the end.
A collaboration with people from Commaful, Write The World, and Booksie. Not all entries were used in this poem, and the rest will be used in the next one.
Credits (in order of appearance of stanzas):
Bruvton (Commaful, Write The World, and Booksie)
hullaballoo22 (Booksie)
sassmyass1 (Commaful)
skye (Commaful)
Ryder (Write The World)


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  • Christy Wisdom

    Ooh, fun! Thanks!

    10 months ago
  • Bruvton

    Thanks! I definitely will. By the way, you two will be included in tomorrow's version of the collab! I can't wait!

    10 months ago
  • Christy Wisdom

    Yeah, it was really fun!

    10 months ago
  • Quille

    Awesome! I hope you do another one of these because it was really fun :) Such a cool idea!
    It all fits together so perfectly! :DDDD

    10 months ago
  • Bruvton

    Thanks! Yeah, I love this poem.

    10 months ago
  • RNE

    That was freakin' awesome! I love how it looks like the speaker has lost hope and then BAM he's up again!!

    10 months ago