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not my best work, but I hope you enjoyed it <3
It was a majesty. Every metaphor and every line captures everything about love, even though some lines did confuse me a bit.
Was the writer talking about "pandemic" also known as the "disease." I wonder what that's gotta do with the passage alone.
It was a good piece. I like it from beginning to end and I still do find it quite charming. Nice work there.