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I really loved how you said it was unlike you. This differs so much from what other writers have said. They know they are depressed and this piece is so great because you realize some people become depressed and aren't born that way.
I think that the way it is, is just fine and nothing more is needed.
I really loved this piece. It was so beautiful and reminded me of myself.