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I really like the imagery. you paint a wonderful scene and i feel as if I am actually there.
your punctuation seems to be inconsistent. there is only one place where you put a period and only two where you put commas. i would either suggest taking the punctuation out all together or adding it to more places so that it doesn't seem out of place
this is a really sweet poem. personally, i feel a close connection to nature and this made me smile.
i'll review your other two pieces some time between tomorrow and Thursday!