Mywve6930

Alfoncina

United Kingdom

Just your average multilingual 18 year old who has creative outbursts at 3am which prompts me to put a whole bunch of jargon together. God lover/Full time Weirdo.

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Bless you for reading x

Red

January 25, 2019

Red is a vision
For people it is just a colour
For  me
It is so much more
l look at red and see the blood of Christ
Slowly caressing his face as 
He payed the ransom
l see red and l drink the blood
As if it was His last supper again
 

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  • Luna Lemon

    I like that you put your own spin on this and brought your religion into it. It made it very personal and really made me see your version of extraordinary in the ordinary. Your word choice was really well done as the poem grows(caressing, ransom, etc) and it really gave this poem an epic feel. Great job and keep writing:)


    8 months ago
  • Peppermint Lemonade

    Beautiful and heartfelt.


    9 months ago
  • Quille

    Such fantastic word choices! :D


    9 months ago