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I just wanted to inform people about what is going on in the world. Thanks for reading!
there's obviously the question of whether or not this affects the writer directly, or if the writer has had any experience with this before- one doesn't need to experience something to know it's wrong, though, and these are rather personal questions.
I think that the second to last sentence carries the most strength, with the idea that children are truly our future, and if we allow child abuse to continue, we're hurting our future.
very strong! I love the way you started with statistics. well-written & powerful