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By: Old Sport
Message to Readers
this should end well
!!!!!feedback is important, lads!!!!!
edit: did anyone else see that piece that uploaded all of the current digits of pi because holy shit
"all the world will be your enemy, prince of a thousand enemies. and whenever they catch you, they will kill you. but first, they must catch you. digger, listener, runner, prince with the swift warning-- be cunning, and full of tricks, and your people will never be destroyed." - richard adams, watership down
The entire piece delighted me! After the cliffhanger of the first one, I needed to know what was gonna happen to Jack.
...Keep reading to find out what happens next....