this is the final-ish version of this poem.
Written By: ghostlyglory
February 6, 2019
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WHOA THIS IS SO AMAZING!!! IT'S VIVID AND ALIVE AND IDK HOW ELSE TO DESCRIBE IT BECAUSE IT'S SO BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN <3
i was a huge fan of the original poem and this is an improvement on what was already a masterpiece! the broken up lines work well, i think. makes the ending more chilling.
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