Peer Review by Blotted (United States)

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six feet under #N.poetry

By: majestically awkward manatee


im drowning in an abyss
of death
of lies
im blinded by the darkness
i can't see
waves of destruction
swallow me
as i



but in reality
im just

six feet under

Title is borrowed from Billie Eilish's song Six Feet Under. 

Message to Readers

Feedback is always appreciated!!! :D

Peer Review

I liked the simplicity of it. I thought it told an interesting story.

I think that writers often write about things they don't fully understand. I think if you could try incoperating what you have experienced in some poems. I feel you'll like how they turn out.

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