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The bit where the editor is whispering to the narrator is very comedic and attention-grabbing.
The argument about how misleading it would be if th Avenger's movie name being used for another show was interesting.
It sounds very well-assembled but needs to be looked over a few times for punctuation and spelling errors (I marked a few).
Think of your audience and keep using this writing style because it has a tone of humor which keeps people reading.