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It's pretty straight forward but I have a friend who said it sounds better if read aloud, so I guess that's true. Anyways, please be nice.
The fact that it's different. Honestly, I thought it would be another one of those "found the true one" kind of stories—by the time I reached the last line, I was far from disappointed. I was completely infatuated with this piece.
No. It's perfect the way it is. :)
This piece had truly moved me and I don't think I can ever forget it. You've portrayed your message beautifully, and might've inspired readers who can relate heavily with the start of the story. I hope every single insecure person reads and understands this, and develop love for themselves. :) Thank you for writing this.